Practice 4: Cell phone manner


 
    For this practice, we were asked to follow the following steps until drafting a paragraph:

        1. Narrow the topic
        2. Brainstorm, using the clustering or mapping method
        3. Edit our ideas
        4. Draft the paragraph

1. Narrow the topic



2. Brainstorm: Clustering/mapping method


3. Edit your ideas


4. Draft a paragraph


    Nowadays cellphones have taken over our lives and the way we relate with the rest of the world. These relationships sometimes are affected by a positive way and, other times, in a negative one. As for the positive ways, we usually find ourselves making friends quicker or even improving our relationship with the ones we already got. On the other hand, we usually end up ignoring our friends when we are in the same room as them and sometimes the friends we make online are Fake. An example to support the positive ways in which phones have affected my own relationship is the good relation I've got with my new friends from university. So, all in all, phones have taken over our lives but it's up to us to decide whether we want it to have a good impact or a bad one.

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